The Colonel in this story is known as Potts; he’s a widower, with a slightly depressed daughter called Diana. However, the main protagonist is Trudy Benson, who is a slightly eccentric woman living in a village, who cleans for the Colonel, and also organises most of the local events. We meet her when she’s on her way to visit the Colonel to discuss - as she thinks - a cake for a party.
It turns out that the Colonel has a different request of Trudy, and as they’re talking about it, his daughter appears unexpectedly, and sees something which she misunderstands. Her mistake is compounded when an annoying visitor tries to accost Trudy… and suddenly she and the Colonel are at the centre of a confusing web of deceit.
It’s a light-hearted book, with some caricatured people, and one or two bizarre scenes that entirely suspend reality for a while. That doesn’t matter; it’s not intended to be taken seriously. It’s a book about love, and finding the right person, and I enjoyed reading it.
This is a short novella, originally published as a serial in a women’s magazine, and I could have read it in one sitting if I’d chosen to. It’s the ideal kind of book for a flight.
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Review copyright 2015 Sue's Book Reviews
'All at sea' is a novella - a short novel - which I read in just three days. Had I had more time, I could probably have read it at one sitting. It's the story of three women on a cruise, and almost all takes place on board a luxury ship.
Lola, Paddy and Evie are three generations of women. Lola, Evie's grandmother, has always wanted to go on a cruise but is only now having the opportunity, since losing her husband. Her daughter Paddy is also widowed, and Paddy's daughter Evie, who must be in her twenties, is going through a very difficult and stressful time with her marriage; the cruise is partly to help her make some difficult decisions. There are hints that her husband is decidedly unpleasant to her.
The only person to be unsure about why she's there at all is Paddy... who doesn't actually like boats. We see quite a lot of the story from her viewpoint.
Lola isn't the sad old lady she might have been; despite orthopedic sandals she's young at heart, and determined to have fun. Evie has no plans to do anything other than make a decision, but then meets a young man whom she rather likes, although she really doesn't want a new relationship. As for Paddy, although she, too, has no intention of beginning a shipboard romance, she meets a charming man who seems to be a kindred spirit.
However, this novella is not just a simple romance. Not everything is as it seems. Who, for instance, is hiding behind the plants? How does Evie fall over, injuring herself and completely forgetting what happened? Why doesn't Paddy's new friend turn up to meet her when he promises to take her to the ball? Stranges of all, who wrote an unpleasant note to Evie's date, warning him off?
In such a short novella, there isn't room for much character development; nonetheless I found myself warming to the somewhat wicked Lola, and also to the stressed and rather naive Paddy. Evie seemed a bit less developed, and the subplots that involved her didn't hold any surprises: by the time the climax came, I had guessed what was going on. Lola, too, while providing some light humour, doesn't have a huge part to play - other than the fact that Paddy is there to look after her.
Still, I enjoyed the story. It's the kind of thing that could have been serialised in a women's magazine, perhaps: not the greatest of stories, but with some substance and a good flow. The writing is good, the conversation believable, and the story moves rapidly with a bit of suspense - but not too much - and a satisfactory ending. My only real gripe is that I would have liked it to be longer with more chance to get to know the characters.
Recommended if you want a quick, light read with a little more than a romance involved. It could only be found in Kindle form, and, while updating this review twelve years after reading it, I can't find it anywhere online. So perhaps it no longer exists.
Review copyright Sue's Book Reviews, 23rd November 2012
